plastic waste in the oceans







this is the biggest problem facing the world today is that the world's oceans are filled with plastic waste. humans have already dumped a lot of plastic waste into the sea which will threaten all living things in the sea and damage the beauty in the sea.

first problem, with the presence of plastic waste in the sea the ecosystems that are in the sea will be damaged, animals will experience death, especially to rare species that are in the sea, and plastic waste can damage the beauty of the underwater where the sea will be dirty due to plastic waste,

should humans have to maintain the underwater ecosystem so that it does not experience damage / extinction for living things by not throwing plastic waste into the ocean area, not only humans don't have to throw garbage into the river area, etc.the goal is to preserve the environment under the sea so as not to be damaged.

the conclusion from me, do not throw plastic waste into the ocean because of the enormous impact of the danger on living things around the ocean and keep the beauty of this beautiful ocean

PARAGRAPH
EXPLANATION
Paragraph 1
Introduction thesis statement
Paragraph 2
Problem
-          ­discuss pollution in the sea
-          is it harmful to living things? in the presence of waste in water?
Paragraph 3
Solution
-          how to prevent it so that the environment in the water is not polluted
-          how is the cleaning process when there is waste in the water
Paragraph 4
Conclusion

Komentar

  1. Nice. But I think it'd be better if the outline is above the essay

    BalasHapus
  2. You must be capitalize in the first word of paragraph great essay

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. You must be capitalize in the first word of paragraph. great essay.

      Hapus
  3. I agree with visnu, over all its good

    BalasHapus
  4. Your explanation is clear and very completed.

    BalasHapus
  5. overall that good essay,but better the out kine you put abive the essay

    BalasHapus
  6. I strongly agree because the current marine ecosystem has been greatly reduced, so we should protect it

    BalasHapus

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