Outline : i thing like to do on weekend
Completing idea : play game, picnic at beach,swimming



So there 3 my thing like to do,

  The first one is picnic at bleach while I went to the beach with my family during the holiday to refreshing,stress at home, and I made a picnic, why did I choose this when I was on holiday? because during the holidays it is a very good moment for me and my family to have a holiday on the beach.

  The second that i like to do ia swimming at bleach
when I was on the beach, I did a lot of things, swim and look for new things in the sea that I could take home, but at that moment I wanted to try surfing, but at the time I traumatized why I was playing in the ocean at the end and waited the sunset.

  The final that i like to do playgame mobile legend
playing mobile legend games is usually called moba mobile is very popular so as to fill my holiday time so the time to fill in empty time.
used to play games with friends or relatives, the advantages of establishing good communication with friends and friends.
 
this is where I did what I did during the holiday.so all activities I did to get rid of boredom at home because I made a vacation  and to kill saturation while on vacation.

Komentar

  1. Your story is very interested but you can improve the story..😁👍

    BalasHapus
  2. Yeah i can improve my storry thanks you for solution

    BalasHapus
  3. great i like playing moba also, lets play together.~
    -yogi.

    BalasHapus
  4. Interesting ideas. And nice paragraphs

    BalasHapus
  5. just some advice from me , first you must to re check the words , second please using space if you want to jump to another paragraph . overall nice story btw

    BalasHapus
  6. Good writing, but i think it will be much more better if you give a little more space so it becomes easier to be read

    BalasHapus
  7. It's good enough~! Lol is good game though. Haha

    BalasHapus

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